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Building Blocks at the Grammar Level: Imitate the greats!

Hello! Anyone ready for an easy imitatio from Ben Hur, A Tale of the Christ by Lew Wallace? Who will accept the challenge? This section is extracted out of a chapter beginning. If the whole section is a bit daunting, focus on imitating only the last portion of the reading. Fun settings to consider describing range from an antique mall, a favorite botanical garden, Whole Foods Market , ebay, or grandma's attic. Note and imitate the alliterative description, "melon or a man".

IN an aperture of the western wall of Jerusalem hang the "oaken valves" called the Bethlehem or Joppa Gate. The area outside of them is one of the notable places of the city. Long before David coveted Zion, there was a citadel there. When at last the son of Jesse ousted the Jebusite, and began to build, the site of the citadel became the northwest corner of his new wall, defended by a tower much more imposing than the old one. The location of the gate, however, was not disturbed, for the reasons, most likely, that the roads which met and merged in front of it could not well be transferred to any other point, while the area outside had become a recognized market-place. In Solomon's day there was great traffic at the locality, shared in by traders from Egypt, and the rich dealers from Tyre and Sidon. Nearly three thousand years have passed, and yet a kind of commerce clings to the spot.
A pilgrim wanting a pin or a pistol, a cucumber or a camel, a house or a horse, a loan or a lentil, a date or a dragoman, a melon or a man, a dove or a donkey, has only to inquire for the article at the Joppa Gate. Sometimes the scene is quite animated, and then it suggests, What a place the old market must have been in the days of Herod the Builder! And to that period and that market the reader is now to be transferred.

Go ahead, try your hand and post it for us all to enjoy!
Posted by Anonymous  
on October 28, 2005, 6:57 am
Are there any other blogs about your topic?

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Posted by Natalie Price  
on October 28, 2005, 11:28 am
Hey, Mrs. Marshall!
I read your blog today and I loved reading what you wrote - it made me miss your class. Have a wonderful weekend.

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Posted by Joy Gregory  
on October 28, 2005, 3:23 pm
Having been employed by an airline for years, we have had many experiences at airports. The following is the joint effort of the Gregory family in doing imitation writing of Ben Hur's marketplace.

"A traveler carrying a bomb or a banana, a knife or a knick knack, a box cutter or a barrette, a fuse or a flashlight, a gun or a gift, an explosive or an egg, a pistol or a pacifier has only to submit for testing at the Security Gate. Sometimes the setting is quite intimidating and then it reminds us 'What a past time it must have been to travel before the days of terrorist threats.' And to that spot and that era, the reader is now transported."

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